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How to write a Press Release
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Educate Together schools are set up and developed
by groups of parents in a local area, who wish to send their children
to a national school that is multi-denominational, child-centred,
co-educational and democratically run. The schools are recognised
by the Department of Education & Science, are non-fee paying and operate
under the same rules applying to all national schools.
Multi-Denominational
Educate Together schools from the outset respect
all ethical and religious traditions. The schools are legally
obliged to cherish and respect the religious, cultural, social
identity of every child and family that attends the school. The
Board of Management cannot promote or favour any particular religious
persuasion. The school organises a comprehensive programme of
education about the major religions and faith systems in the world
but does not teach any particular faith or creed. However, the
school facilitates any group of parents who wish to do so to organise
religious instruction for their children outside the main school
programme. The religious education programme of an Educate Together
school does not avoid issues of ethics and morality. It teaches
children core values of appreciation and respect of social, cultural
and other human difference; health and safety; social responsibility
and rights and other features necessary to inform a child's developing
mind to live in our rapidly changing society.
Child Centred
While covering the curriculum set out by the Department
of Education for all National Schools, the educational programme
of an Educate Together school is developed creatively through
genuine dialogue between teachers and parents for the common good
of the children.
Co-educational
All Educate Together schools are co-educational
and have active programmes to counter gender stereotyping and
inequity in all aspects of school life.
Democratically Run
As all Educate Together schools are set up by groups
of parents, parents have unparalleled access and involvement in
the running and development of the school. The ethos of the school
is to promote the fullest participation by parents and teachers
in decision-making processes and to promote a genuine creative
partnership between parental involvement and the professional
role of teachers. The role of the patron (a structure that is
insisted upon by the state) is either carried out by Educate Together
nationally or by a local company limited by guarantee. In both
cases, this role is governed by a legal constitution, decisions
are controlled by general meetings and officers are regularly
elected.
Partnership in Education
With their unique ethos and democratic structure,
Educate Together schools deliver a tremendous opportunity for
parents, teachers and children to develop an educational community
which provides an optimal environment for children to develop
their intellectual, academic, social, cultural and physical life.
Because they are so rooted in a living community, the schools
can and do become important community resources making their facilities
available in an appropriate way outside school hours.
Educate Together
There are currently 52 Educate Together schools
in Ireland, of which 20 are in the greater Dublin region. One
of the schools is a gaelscoil. Educate Together is the national
representative body of these school communities. It is a company
limited by guarantee and a registered charity. This company acts
as the patron of new Educate Together schools and represents all
its members in negotiations with the Department of Education and
Science and other national organisations. Educate Together receives
minimal government assistance and is dependent on charitable funding.
It has a small national office in Dublin with paid staff and volunteer
workers. The Board of Directors of Educate Together all work in
a voluntary capacity and are elected annually from the school
communities.
For further information, please contact:
Educate Together, H8a Centrepoint Business Park,
Oak Drive, Dublin 12.
Telephone: (01) 4292500 Fax: (01) 4292502 email:
info@educatetogether.ie
Web site: http://www.educatetogether.ie
Accessing the Media
Writing a Press Release
- A press release is a notification to a media
organisation that something is about to happen or has happened.
- The media is the middleman between you and its
audience.
- The press release should be faxed or e-mailed
to all daily, weekend and local papers, and radio/TV as appropriate,
two days before and on the morning of the launch.
- Include the date of the release and mark it "For
Immediate Publication" or "Embargo: time and date".
- If the event is also of interest internationally,
the press release could be sent to the relevant overseas specialist
magazines/publications.
Guide to Writing a Press Release
- Keep it short - one page if possible, 1.5 spacing,
short paragraphs
- In order to attract attention, a press release
needs a good headline
- Aim to make a number of key points. These could
include - brief details on the event such as who, what, when,
when, where
- If appropriate put it in the context of the wider
developments in the sector
- Prioritise two or three points you want to get
across. Use quotes
- Make reference to the development of Educate
Together, growth and investment, research activities, plans
for the future, etc.
- It is very important to include a contact point
with name and phone number, for further information.
A good press release headline is:
- Short and to the point
- In vivid language
- Active
- Has human implications
- In the present tense
- Imaginable, something we can visualise
Note: When you are writing a headline remember
there is no obligation on the reader to pay any attention to it.
The obligation is on you to attract the reader. It is pointless
to think the mass media should be interested in your issue. There
are no "shoulds" in mass media. You have to attract and persuade
people to read your story. The onus is on the writer, not the
reader.
The first paragraph needs to answer key questions:
- If your story gets into a paper and another,
bigger story comes along before it goes to print, they will
edit your story. Under pressure, a sub-editor will simply chop
off the end of it. So your story must be understandable if what
follows the first paragraph is chopped off.
- Readers are busy and distracted. They may not
have the time to read every story to the end. Deliver the information
to them as early as possible.
- Keep it simple.
The key questions are:
- What (is happening)?
- Who (is involved)?
- Where (is it happening)?
- When?
- Why?
A good press release uses active verbs and first-degree
words:
This sentence uses the passive form of the verb:
"The town hall was occupied by protesters".
This sentence uses the active form of the verb:
"Protesters occupied the town hall".
Remember if its a headline dont just
go for a present or future tense verb:
Protesters occupy town hall
Protesters to occupy town hall
First-degree words are the words we use automatically
use:
Boat
Book
Face
Second-degree words are the words we use
when we wish to be more varied or impressive
Vessel
Volume/Tome
Countenance
In order to understand second-degree words we almost have to relate
it to its first-degree equivalent in news stories and in press
releases - first-degree words are better because they dont
make the reader work.
Embargo
In the upper left hand corner of your press release,
you put an indicator to the recipient stating when it can be used.
For example, if you were releasing a major report,
you might send it to a journalist on Tuesday 1st, but embargo
it for Thursday the 3rd. That would give the journalist sufficient
time to read through the report, master the detail and write a
story, while ensuring the story did not appear until Thursday.
By contrast, it might suit you to distribute a press
release in the morning, but in order to ensure that the evening
paper does not use it; you might put, in the upper hand corner:
Embargo until 9 p.m. Thursday 3rd
Be warned however, newspapers have been known
to break embargos. If you have a story that must be kept secret
until a particular day, you may be better advised not to send
it out in advance under an embargo, but keep it safe until the
last moment.
Margins
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Your margins should not look
crowded. Make sure margins are at least an inch on either side.
- Leave a blank of two inches
at the top and an inch and a half at the bottom.
- Remember that a sub-editor may need to pencil
notes or sub-headings into your text, so leave room for this
purpose.
Paragraphs
Broken up text is much easier to read than text
that is presented in long, uninterrupted blocks. Use paragraphing:
one paragraph for each new idea - a new paragraph for each quotation.
If you find a paragraph running more than three sentences, examine
the possibility of breaking it in two.
Dates
You put the date of the release along the line "For
Immediate Release", bearing in mind that a press release might
go missing and be retrieved later. If the news staff dont
know when it arrived "For immediate release" is meaningless, whereas...
For Immediate Release Friday, 3rd April, 2004
...makes perfect sense
In addition try to get the dates of what you are
writing about into the first paragraph.
Quotations
There is much more to quotations than meets the
eye.
- When you see quotation marks in a story, we know
there is a human being, a voice, in the story. This adds to
its interest.
- Quotation marks, properly used, pull the eye
of the reader, so that someone who might otherwise stop reading
after the first paragraph is more likely to continue reading
if there are quotations in the remainder of the text.
- Putting some of the data in the mouth of a speaker
gives greater variety to what would otherwise be a straight
presentation of details.
Guidelines for using quotations
- Dont dribble half a quotation onto the
end of a sentence
- Make sure you have enough words in front of the
attribution
10 DONTS for Press releases
- Dont type your press release in capital
letters
- Dont type you press release in italics
- Dont type your press release on both sides
of a page
- Dont fail to proof-read your release -
or better still, have it proof read by someone else
- Dont use clichés
- Dont use padding (with regard to
in the context of)
- Dont send it late (some provincial papers
might stop taking copy much earlier in the week than you might
think - check with them.)
- Dont send it to the wrong person - or to
the right person with their name misspelled
- Dont use bold type to emphasise points
- Dont open quotation marks and forget to
close them
Photography
- Its worthwhile considering booking a photographer
(if your budget permits) to record your event, for circulation
of prints to the national and local media, and for use in future
promotional literature and/or other publications. If you know
a friend that can assist, even better.
- In general, national media usually only print
photos taken by their own photographers - for this reason, if
you feel the event is suitable and provides genuine appropriate
photo opportunities, you could include the photo editors of
the national media on your mailing list.
- You can also commission a photography company
to cover the event and to circulate prints to national, local
and international media, as well as specialist magazines as
appropriate. This will also depend on your available budget.
- If you want circulation on the day to the print
media, you will have to use one of the major photography companies,
which have the required studio facilities to provide a same
day processing/distribution service.
- Suggested names: Eyecon Photography, Ph:
01 491 1300/1301 or e-mail: info@eyeconphoto.ie;
Liam Burke, Press 22 Ph: 061 204 2222 or e-mail: photos@press22.com;
McFeely Photography, Kevin McFeely, Ph: 01 890 1304 or email:
kevinmcfeely@eircom.net
Internal Communications/ Newsletters
- For possible inclusion in the ETEN, either in advance or retrospectively, please send details to the National Office at info@educatetogether.ie, by phone 01 4292500 or by fax 01 4292502
- Include a suitable photo from your event.
For a sample Press Release please click here.
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